Showing posts with label Assignment Three. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Assignment Three. Show all posts

Wednesday, 16 May 2012

Preparing for Assessment – Assignment Three


This assignment gave me a lot of trouble, as I’ve already recorded earlier in this blog and elsewhere in notes exchanged with my tutor.  I don’t intend to revisit those struggles – partly of my own making, I think, but also partly related to the nature of the brief itself.  What matters here is how I have looked at the assignment for my assessment submission and the changes that I have made – and why.

·         All the images have been reprinted, with small adjustments to just about all of them as my Photoshop and printing skills have improved since they were first done.

·         I have taken note of some specific suggestions from my tutor, resulting in:

·         The replacement of one of the interior images of Huddersfield’s Queensgate Market, which seemed to add little – this one.


The new image is an external view that includes the ‘iconic’ external artwork referred to in my original notes and also shows the external extension of the concrete curves into the external structure.  It is questionable whether it strictly meets the brief, which focuses on function, but it does add variety – and I guess one of the buildings functions would be to act as an iconic reference point in the town’s architectural landscape.  It certainly does that, as this images shows –and with a strong reference back to its 1970’s origins.



·         There is also a change in the Yorkshire Sculpture Park Visitor Centre group; this time an additional image.  My notes referred to the fact that this building acted as a bridge through formal gardens, but there were no images that confirmed that.  The closest I could get was this image, which confirms the busy, transient nature of the space’s function, but also demonstrates, to a degree, how it uses the large window space to involve the visitor in the external aspects of the park as well.



·         As well as these small changes, I have introduced a new location into the series.  Whilst working on the assignment last year, I had photographed a house that we stayed in on holiday in France, and its gardens.  Working under my restricted interpretation of the brief, I had originally decided not to include it, but having been encouraged to take a less restrictive approach, I have now added it in.  One of my key reasons for doing this is because I felt that the images I took then represented something closer to a personal response to a ‘place’ and less of a mechanical response to a brief.  To my mind that gives them a little more merit and value than some of the others.  It also adds another dimension of variety to the overall submission.  These are the images.





I am, overall, still left with a feeling of dissatisfaction about the outcomes on the assignment.  Whilst I have produced, in the end, a large set of images covering a variety of places and spaces, which meet the requirements of the original brief, I find them largely uninspiring and uninspired.

Friday, 29 July 2011

Assignment Three – Tutor Feedback

I have now had feedback from my tutor on Assignment 3, and have also had the opportunity for a thirty minute telephone conversation with him as well.  (I have to say that his willingness to spend time in direct conversation certainly helps a lot.)  The written feedback was detailed again and, besides the general comments that I am going to record here, there were lots of individual pointers and suggestions.

From my point of view, the main thing is that his opinion of my handling of the assignment is positive.  He was understanding of my concerns about the limitations of sticking strictly to the detailed brief – though pointed out, quite rightly, that there is a hint of a suggestion in the notes that a garden could be included (in the form of one of the illustrations).  I might decide to extend the number of subjects from five to six in the final submission and include some images I took of a garden in Carcassonne.  He praised the fact that, in spite of my concerns, I kept at it, reflected on it, and came through with a competent result.  As I have already commented, I do think the exercise has been worthwhile, despite my frustrations.

There were some useful comments on the choices of images that I had made. (I included some of my ‘rejections’ and ‘trial efforts’ in the submission so that he could see my train of thought.)  His comments could lead me to make one or two changes/additions to the set when I come to submit for assessment.

Some of our discussion was around technical issues.  I sent prints, which on the whole were OK, but one or two were a little dark.  Similarly, his feeling was that some parts of some of the images could have benefited from lightening.  We discussed how one would approach doing that in Photoshop, which was broadly in line with the approach that I had learned from ‘Classroom in a Book’, but with the chance to discuss in more detail.  My conclusion on all aspects of post-processing and printing is that I am making progress but that there is no quick way to learn these things.  It needs a certain amount of practice and trial/error.  Interestingly, the notion did come up that having the experience to actually define what is wrong with a print is half the battle.  I can look and sense that it isn’t right – but defining what is actually not right is a bit harder and needs practice.  Then comes the minor issue of knowing what needs doing to put it right; followed by the little matter of having the skills to do it.

Overall, I have to say that I feel better about this assignment now.  It hasn’t filled me with excitement and inspiration but I feel more comfortable that I have been able to deliver an OK outcome; I can see some areas to improve the submission for assessment; and I have continued to learn and develop through the work I’ve done and my reflections on it.

Monday, 18 July 2011

Assignment 3: Reflections after submitting

I have completed Assignment 3 and sent notes, images & prints to my tutor.  I have struggled with this assignment and I am not especially happy with the images submitted, but it was time to accept that and move on.  These are my reflections on why I have had a problem.

I suppose I should accept and note that it has been a busy time with other distractions - holiday, election to OCASA President etc - but I don't actually think that is anything more than a contributory factor.  On this assignment, I have not managed to reconcile producing something that inspires and pleases, something satisfying with a purpose, with fulfilling the brief.  The problem may largely be my own lack of inspiration - either generally, or with these buildings, or with the assignment itself - but I do think there is at least some relationship between my struggle and an issue that has been much discussed on the OCA Student Forum and/or Flickr - meeting the brief versus following a personally interesting and inspiring direction.

Assignment 3 of People & Place is a detailed and quite specific brief, which to my mind leaves rather less room for personal interpretation than some others.  I have probably met the brief with my submission and so have perhaps made a reasonable shot at the assignment in that respect.  The dissatisfaction is more about my own personal reaction to the images produced.  We are encouraged by OCA tutors on the OCA Forum to use the brief as a jumping off point to pursue our personal creative development.  I did that to a certain extent on Assignment 2.  But I seem to have found this brief much more restrictive - not so easy to break out of the shackles and leap!

Now, back to my earlier point, I am not denying that personal motivation and inspiration need to be there and were lacking to some degree on this assignment - so, not making excuses or even having a moan!!  But, my feedback to OCA (and I have made a similar point on other assignment/project notes e.g. some of those on the Landscape course) is that, if students are to be more creative and less 'conservative', then ideally this needs to come across more clearly in course notes and all briefs need to be written with that in mind.

For me, the learning point is, I think, that my personal development will be much better served by following what inspires than by following the letter of the brief.  I already knew that, and followed that path with the previous assignment, but I've fallen back into the trap here. (Albeit, there shouldn't really be a trap, should there?)

My notes to my tutor were very detailed, and I don't intend to repeat them here but I will post the images submitted, albeit without comment (other than the general one above).  Here they are:

Byram Arcade, Huddersfield





Queensgate Market, Huddersfield





Visitor Centre, Yorkshire Sculpture Park






Underground Gallery, Yorkshire Sculpture Park





The Garden Shed





Thursday, 30 June 2011

A long gap!

No posts for more than a month – it feels quite difficult to pick up the threads after such a long gap.  A brief explanation might be a good place to start.  A holiday in France takes up some of the time – and that has also provided some opportunity for reflection (which will emerge through later comments and imminent project/assignment write-ups) as well as supplying photographic opportunities, both for this course and for pleasure.  The OCA Student Association Presidential Election has also intervened – and my election to the role has resulted in some immediate work since I returned from holiday.  The day job has needed some attention, with a few business issues around.  So, those are the ‘excuses’!

Actually, though, there has been something else going on, and I wrote these reflections in the notebook that I have kept alongside this blog for the People & Place course.  I have transcribed it more or less exactly as I wrote on the morning of 9th June, staying in a house in Carcassonne, SW France.

“Just before I left for France on 31/05/11, I reached a conclusion that, try as I might, some of the images for Assignment 3, particularly those of the Yorkshire Sculpture Park Visitor Centre, are simply not good enough.  OK, the assignment hasn’t inspired me etc, etc, but the noisy, underexposed and repetitive images for that site just aren’t good enough.

“Alongside (or maybe because of) that, I’ve been having one of those crises that I now understand dog the world of creative arts.  It has been present during the first half of my holiday.  How do I take photographs of this holiday?  The ‘OCA student’ wants to have meaning and purpose in what I do ... the ‘budding artist’ wants to find feeling and emotion ... but the ‘tourist’ wants to record what he sees ... and the ‘partner’ wants to take back what he knows might ultimately please his fellow traveller.  Out of all of that, and the Assignment 3 work, comes the big question(s) – the dog!  What am I doing? Do I have anything to say? Do I ever have any emotional reactions to anything? Am I worthy? ... and so on.

“There was some related discussion on the OCA Flickr forum – emanating from a question about the Landscape course.  Two or three things emerge:-

·         Eileen posts a link to the work of David Moore & comments that he creates ‘a real sense of place’.  That phrase makes me follow the link, and I find images of rooms ... but focused on detail, incomplete images that leave a sense of what is happening outside the frame ... but with (for me) real aesthetic quality in the graphical structures and the use of colour.

·         I am reminded of my earlier research of magazine images of spaces and places, which use the same ‘partial’ presentation device.  But I am also reminded of images that I have made myself, in the past – a venetian blind & its shadows in Honfleur, some steps in Spain, a tree and a door in Niguelas.

·         Then Clive W pops up in the Flickr forum discussion and says – don’t go looking for emotion, and don’t expect ‘Wuthering Heights’ .. but try and let it come to you.

“And now, maybe, I can see a way forward.  We visited Abbaye St. Hilaire yesterday – a 13th-14th century abbey in L’Aude, famed for its cloisters and for the fact that its monks invented sparkling wine (before Champagne)!  Doing the tourist bit, with 18-200mm lens loaded, feeling frustrated because I know I’m not creating images that mean anything to me, I switch to an 85mm prime lens and begin looking for detail, for ‘partial’ or ‘partially complete’ images that are visually attractive, graphically interesting, but also convey ‘place’ ... and now, just maybe, there are some creative juices flowing again!!!”

These are a few of the photographs that I took that day.  I don’t pretend they are anything so very special, but they made me feel better!






Wednesday, 13 April 2011

Buildings and Spaces – some research

The introductory notes to Section Three of the course say, quite rightly, that ‘Non-architectural photography of buildings and man-made spaces ... is not considered a genre ...’.  So, I have been doing some research – looking at examples.

I started out in the obvious place – magazines related to the ‘Home’, where there would be plenty of images of domestic spaces.  It didn’t take long to reach one (hardly surprising) conclusion.  Photographs of interiors that have been taken for use in advertisements are totally product-focused.  Since their whole purpose is to highlight and sell the kitchen, floor, furniture, or whatever, that is to be expected.  Almost without fail, the outcome is a stark, impersonal, de-humanised image of an artificial-looking space.  I found one exception – an advert for an iron bed-frame, where there was a crumpled spread on the bed, with two dogs lying on it, and a canvas bag casually pushed underneath.  This one actually did look as though the human race exists, but many didn’t!  Images designed to illustrate articles were, on the whole ‘better’ at including a sense of humanity.  They included the normal clutter of human life – tidied, perhaps, but present – usually shot in natural light.  The framing is interesting when photographing a domestic interior (as opposed to a studio set).  It becomes necessary to work around the ‘architecture’ of the space, whereas an advertising shot will frequently create that architecture to suit the image the client wants.  The result is that many shots can seem harshly and arbitrarily cropped, when viewed in their own right rather than as part of the article (with text around them, and supported by other images of the same space).  Looking at shots of a real kitchen, for example, the frame cuts through a table, a cupboard, a work-surface, a towel, and so on.  There is a door, half open, leading outside.  It works OK, partly because it includes lots of elements of the room within a small area, but also precisely because the cropping suggests a continuation beyond the frame.  We get a sense of the space that we can’t see.  A lesson here for some of the advertising photographers, perhaps – just create partial-reality, but photograph it as though there is much more that we can’t see!!

Then I thought I would move on to some of the photographic books and browse through, looking primarily for pictures of man-made spaces.  I have been surprised by how many I’ve found – and by the opportunity to make some interesting comparisons between some well-known names, for example.  What about Joel Meyerowitz, Stephen Shore and William Eggleston, to kick things off?  I’ve written up some notes for myself elsewhere on some of the individual images, which I won’t write-up in full here, because creating links to the images would be very time-consuming but the comments won’t be much use without the images.  So, I’ll keep it general.

Looking at Meyerowitz’s ‘Cape Light’ first of all; the very first ‘Plate’ (‘Hartwig House, Truro’) is an interior shot, looking through a series of open doors but, interestingly, with the frame cropped so that we sense another room to the right and other space around us.  And there are other examples – not least, the series of ‘Porch’ images in this book.  In these, he photographs a man-made external space, the Porch, by looking through it and outwards, in different lights and under different conditions.  There is Plate 31, ‘Trompe L’Oeil Interior’, which is actually an image of a big open space inside a church.  As the title suggests, it features a trick of light and reflection, but the space itself is almost ‘hinted at’, as there are the tips of pews in the foreground/bottom of frame, and just a hint of ceiling at the top – otherwise, it’s just empty space.  There are more examples in his ‘Tuscany’ book – Plate 16 ‘Inside the Old Guard House’, which is being used to butcher wild boar, no question about ‘function’ in this case.  As usual with Meyerowitz, it is the sensitive and creative use of light that comes through, but also that framing, designed to create interest and to give a sense of what is happening around, and usually with a ‘human’ touch.

In Stephen Shore’s case, I’ve been looking through ‘Uncommon Places’, where there are, of course, countless images of hotel rooms.  I suppose there is almost a typographical thing going on – collecting these images as he does his ‘road trip’.  Shore’s pictures have a much more ‘deadpan’ feel, which matches the impersonal, dehumanised spaces of the hotel rooms very well.  Again we see the ‘selective framing’ that is unavoidable when photographing a room; and sometimes almost down to what becomes more like a still life – as in Room 28, Holiday Inn, Medicine Hat – you can almost smell that room, just from the colour and texture in the table lamp that features as the major subject.  Shore also ‘collects’ images of houses in ‘Uncommon Places’ – but very definitely not from an architectural point of view.  Colour features highly – Terrace Bay, Ontario, with its half finished blue wooden walls and bright red door; or Kimballs Lane, Moody, Maine, with red, grey, blue, yellow, green, purple, plus bags of personality and a quirky white poodle lurking behind a fence.  Then in complete contrast, there is Wilde Street and Colonization Avenue, Dryden, with a totally faceless concrete dwelling, photographed in the shade on a sunny day to enhance its facelessness, sitting at an anonymous road junction, and framed by two ubiquitous telegraph poles and a random network of wires and cables.  OK, I’ve gone on a bit about Shore – essentially, by collecting and juxtaposing, he is creating interest and character, making anonymous places and spaces into works of art.  They don’t have the humanity that I always feel is present in Meyerowitz; they are soulless places a lot of the time, but they are lifted out of anonymity by what he does with them.

Then I looked at Eggleston’s ‘Guide’, where there are also images of rooms, spaces and buildings.  As usual with Eggleston, these are rather less ‘comfortable’ images than, say, Meyerowitz – a darker side to them.  Page 20 Tallahatchie County is a well-known photograph – the living room with an unmade jigsaw on the coffee table.  Soft natural light; half-cropping of items around edge of frame; a ‘softer’ finish, less sharpness and less clarity compared with the Shore & JM (hand-held 35mm, I assume, and wider angle) – but, it’s the knee jutting crudely into the bottom of the frame, and the random scattering of the jigsaw pieces that make this feel unsettled, as though something has been interrupted – and the door is closed, unlike virtually every such interior with JM.  And there are others – the famous green-tiled shower room – a harsh, flash-lit image, overpoweringly utilitarian, not a place for refreshment and relaxation.  The same could be said for Shore’s hotel rooms (and bath/shower rooms) but Eggleston just goes a stage further – not deadpan but brash.

That has been an interesting exercise – and it has taken in some other contemporary work along the way e.g. Jeff Wall & Thomas Struth – because although it is certainly true to say that ‘man-made space’ doesn’t figure as a recognised genre, it is very clear that it is a concept that has attracted the attention of many well-known and respected photographers.  Photographic artists seek to bring the viewer’s attention to aspects of life, often mundane aspects, and since we all spend so much of our time in man-made spaces, and since those spaces differ in the way that they can impact on or reflect the mood and behaviour of human beings, it isn’t surprising that those photographers have taken the time to portray how these spaces look and feel.  My turn next – and I think I’ll play it safe with one of our own domestic spaces at home to begin with.